2 minute opening idea

In my previous vlog I spoke about our idea for our 2 minute opening, but it was a bit rambled and I was making no sense at all. So, I've decided to write our idea instead!

It starts with a young girl on a swing in a park holding a teddy bear, in the past. She swings for about 15 seconds, then she stands and walks towards the forest. As she walks into the forest she drops her bear and the camera pans to the sky. The audience then hears a shrill scream/cry and then the clouds in the sky move and the sky changes in a time lapse. The camera then pans back to the forest in present day, and we see a girl and her dog walk into the same area that the young girl had walked into. The screen then fades to black.

We've planned on not using any dialogue at all, so we can focus more on camera angles and other sounds. We're also hoping that the lack of dialogue makes the film extremely eerie and creeps our audience out.

We're hoping to use Holly's niece Keeley as the young girl:

Keeley is perfect for the part, as she's old enough to take it seriously, yet still young enough to make her part creepy. She's also very pretty, which is how we envisioned the young girl.